Translator & Editor Corner
ED:
Please read this first to fully appreciate my edit
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0ByG0sr4cw9seQjJKRkpEeFhmWWNWUmpJM2NMR2ZEekFudEZn
Post on the comment if
you noticed any mistake.
Translator:
Guro
Editor & TLC:
TheDefend
Orc Disaster
The Chief of the
Lizardmen had desperately tried to hold back the incoming attack from the orc
soldiers.
He
divided the troops and sends them forth to the 4 passageway, they will be
supporting each other.
Since
the passageway was not really that large, and the fact that only a few can
fight, it was a relief.
If
you considered the strength of the individuals, the small forces of Lizardmen
had higher strength compared the Orc soldiers.
At
the end of the chamber are the evacuated women and children, and those who
can fight are protecting them in the front lines.
They
were there in case that someone managed to break through from the passage.
The
Chief observed the war situation and realized that they could not survive more
than a day.
While
he kept switching the troops to let them recover their fatigue, they are still
managing to fight decently, even so, between the gap of switching the two
teams, they were pushed back little by little.
Their
current forces was less than 1,200.
Even
without regrouping, he can see that there were some of the troops that
died in battle.
Also,
another nightmare struck the Chief. The Orc soldiers began to be shrouded in
yellow aura.
What
is this?
Was
what he thought, but the answer was given immediately. The combat ability of
the individual orc was increasing.
While
they did not drastically grow stronger, they now posed the ability to win
against a Lizardmen.
Until
now, the individual ability of Lizardmen was able to hold them off, but now
that advantage was lost.
This
is it...The only fate remaining for them is a honorable death.
The
Chief prepared his resolution.
Escaping
would be useless, struggling any longer would be useless.
Even
so.....
[
Listen!!! Women and children shall retreat from this place! Guards, Gather!
You
guys shall escorts the women and children, keep protecting them to the very
end, even if it’s just 1 more person! I will not tolerate anyone who gave up!
To obtain the new world (Alt: or to see
the future),
as many people as possible are needed to survive!!! ]
With
all of the dignity he had, he spoke in a loud voice.
[Chief,
are you going to do it?]
The
Vice captain of the Guards come asking.
[
I know! I won’t let the Orc do as they pleased!
I will show them the strength of Lizardmen !!! ]
Never
show your weaknesses.
For
him, it was the symbol of strength for the Lizardmens which bring him
hope.
[Warriors! Prepare yourself to fight to the death against the Orc! Do not let a single one of them pass!
[Warriors! Prepare yourself to fight to the death against the Orc! Do not let a single one of them pass!
We
will buy the woman and children the time they needed to escape!!! ]
And
so, the warriors group becomes inspired.
There
was no despair in the Lizardmen faces. Even if the opponent was stronger, if it
possible for the women and children to escape, it’s their victory.
Their
future will not cease.
After
this, it would be a difficult time for them, but that doesn’t mean the end of
their species.
[
[ [U~o o ooooo ! ! ! ] ] ]
They
raise their voice to dispel their fear.
The
cave interior was filled with the Lizardmen war cry and it reverberate with
thunderous vibration.
Satisfied
with the situation, a voice heard from the place where the women and children
tried to escape.
[
That’s going to be troubling. Chief-dono, the promise was still not fulfilled
yet. Weren’t you supposed to wait here?]
Quietly,
there stood a man which nobody unawares of.
With
darkish skin, bluish black hair. Blue eyes, a demon with height 190 cm.
Once,
he and the demon had met, which he identified himself as Souei.
Have
they arrived? No, the alliance was not formed yet. But....
[
Souei-dono... Have they arrived? But, we did not follow your advice,
we have been disrespectful…]
[
Advice...? What you talking about? Such thing does not matter
at all. All of you please stay in this place. The promise is tomorrow.
Tomorrow, My Lord wish to come here personally.]
The
promise for alliance, he doesn’t know if it can protect them. But...
[However,
we cannot stay here, the Orcs are here!]
Hearing
the words, Souei glanced at the passages with the noisy Orc soldiers.
He
look at them as if he was looking at trash.
[Those
guys noisy stomach certainly can’t calm down.... Very well. I suppose I
have to clean them up first. Please wait here for a moment.]
After
he said that, he started to calmly walk towards them.
Is
it illusion? It’s looks as if Souei body start blurring and overlapping.....No!
It has divided into four clones.
Each
of them went into the passage, they reached the place where the Lizardmen
were devoting themselves to defense.
[Substitute]
Saying
that word.
The
4 clones in each passage were facing the Orc soldiers.
Then
the Lizardmen that were there saw the incredible spectacle.
The
orcs, who have tormenting us as if hungry ghosts from hell, could not break
through Souei’s stoic defense.
At
each passage stand a single person.
[Misaitoayazanjin! (Beheading Formation
of Restraining String!) ]
It
was a slaughter dance of glittering string.
Steel
thread spreading around the passage instantly, and it move freely according to
Souei‘s command.
As
soon as he executes the technique in the passage, the Orc soldier’s body was
cut down.
For those who come to invade, they think it will be a massacre without any resistance.
For those who come to invade, they think it will be a massacre without any resistance.
It
was unfortunate for those Orc soldiers. At each and every passage, every one of
them got killed by the skill that Souei’s clones used.
Without
their sense of self, only following simple order, therefore they cannot feel
fear.
One by one, they march forward as if to let themselves
be trapped in the stretched spider thread. However, this
thread is terrible trap that instantly reap life itself.
They
happily devoured the corpse that has been chopped to pieces, continuing their
advance, and get killed.
The
scene repeated endlessly, the Lizardman can’t let out any sounds.
The
battlefield with structure like labyrinth is a stage for Souei.
The
spread sharp trap had many varieties; he can change it according to the
situation. This time, Souei focused his interest in elimination of the Orc
soldiers.
He
didn’t show any mercy, he carry out the slaughter without even batting an
eyelids.
The
Lizarmen didn’t let any sound in astonishment.
After
witnessing the strength from a different dimension. It’s become the embodiment
of fear.
Overwhelming
and surpassing them all, it was the figure of the strong.
The
situation has changed; 2 hours has passed since then.
Until
now, the Orc soldiers that had come to invade were easily killed and they
suddenly begun to withdraw.
Has
something occurred that it changed the war situation?
Souei
intuitively think.
The
amount of clones that he can use at the same time is 6. Because the first two
clones went out, only four clones left to protect the chamber.
The
main body was lurking in the shadow while controlling the clones.
Everything
is all right now. He decides to entrust the rest to his clones.
Souei’s
main body begun to move without anyone noticing.
He
returned back to his Lord’s side, Rimuru.
−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−−
The Demon Lord Orc Disaster had identifies himself as a Demon Lord. Moreover, the name was someone else’s. Or in this case, it would be correct if I say that hestole it?
The
Demon Lord Orc Disaster fulfilled Gelmudo’s ambition to become a
Demon Lord, but it just that.
The
one who really desire to become Demon Lord was Gelmudo.
The
Orc Lord without self-awareness wasloyal to him. Of course, I was not aware of
such thing, it don’t have any relation with them.
Self-awareness
begun to appear, his eyes become intelligent.
Declaring
himself the Demon Lord, as the Demon Lord Orc Disaster Gelmudo, he has evolved
with strength beyond comparison of an Orc Lord.
Behind
me, Benimaru was in a battle stance.
He
probably recognized the Demon Lord Orc Disaster Gelmudo as a threat.
The
smile he showed up until now had disappeared, it has become a serious
expression.
[Rimuru-sama!
I will handle it!]
So
he says, he used the Black Flame Prison (Hellflare).
I
receive the signal by telepathy; I proceed to fly into the sky. It’s good to
have the wings.
The
Demon Lord Orc Disaster Gelmudo is in the center of the formed black sphere
(dome). Inside it raged a high temperature storm that burn the Demon Lord.
However....
After
about ten seconds, the Demon Lord Orc Disaster calmly stands in the location of
the disappeared sphere (Dome).
It’s
not that it doesn’t effective. He doesn’t seem to have any heat resistance
ability, his skin is completely burnt.
But
it’s not a mortal wound, because he clad himself in his aura, it seems to had
similar effect with Heat resistance (resist).
Moreover,
the burnt skins are starting to regenerate.It’s the same as Gelmudo, he also
had regeneration ability.
The
magical energy is now overwhelmingly different from just. Heis now a
self-proclaimed Demon Lord.
Rather,
“Voice of the World” said it before; this guy had the “Demon Lord
Quality”. He evolved, and truly become a Demon Lord.
This
guy must be killed now, or he will become a real disaster. I’m convinced so.
Benimaru
is frowning, because it managed to withstand his deadly attack.
Indeed,
Black Flame Prison (Hellflare) is powerful. However, it is an AoE
skill that weak if used against an individual.
The
energy is scattered and not focused. To use it against an individual, more of
the energy has to be focused.
If done that way, the resistance and the regeneration will not able to cope and he will be completely burned.
If done that way, the resistance and the regeneration will not able to cope and he will be completely burned.
The
one who attack next after Benimaru was Ranga.
He
use the [Black Lighting] just like I suggest him to and converge it to a single
point before shooting it.
Receiving
a direct hit, the Demon Lord Orc Disaster Gelmudo body stiffened.
The
aim is good; I will use it that way from now on.
The
area of attack was adjusted for individual target, the optimum blow.
The
black charred Demon Lord Orc Disaster, collapse in the place where he stands.
Of
course that happens. Even I could not bear such attack.
Rather
than one on one it’s a fight against many opponent, moreover defeatedby a
surprise attack, please do not think badly of me.
Perhaps,
any of the Oni would not win in one on one.
But,
with this the war would finally end....... at the very moment I think that,
[Fuha~a!
So this is pain! I even sawa glimpse of death!
But,
it not enough to make the great me perish!!!]
Even
though he is carbonized and seemed dead, the Demon Lord Orc Disaster rises up.
If
you look at him, he pulls and torn his arm and eats it.
The Demon Lord Orc Disaster then ran to the Orc soldiers. He casually kills the Orc soldiers and eats them.
The Demon Lord Orc Disaster then ran to the Orc soldiers. He casually kills the Orc soldiers and eats them.
What
a guy! Each time he eat, his carbonized skin peel off and a brand new skin
appear.
Also,
the arm that he torn off has regrown
Really,
what a tremendous regeneration ability.
[Are
you kidding me...]
Ranga
murmured involuntary.
It
goes beyond aridiculous monster, its way beyond reality.
It
seems Ranga’s energy was empty after using that attack. He sat down and stops
moving.
I
wonder if he is entering the low activity state.
It
can’t be helped. Energy consumption of [Black Lighting] was enormous.
With
this, he will not able to use it any more.
A
single flash.
Unnoticed,
Shion swung her Ōdachi, she did a single slash.
The
slash that she had put all her strength into. The Demon Lord Orc Disaster stops
the slash with the Butcher knife “Meat Crusher” in his hand.
The
slash didn’t connect. He takes some damage from the
blow. But it’s not serious.
[This
filthy pig is a Demon Lord? Stop being so conceited!]
She
shout, and once again she clad her Ōdachi with her aura, she raise her sword
over her head and then swings it down.
The
Demon Lord Orc Disaster stood to his feet while staggering, this time he hold
the Butcher knife “Meat Crusher” with both hands. The sword and the knife
clash, resulting in fierce sparks.
The
Demon Lord Orc Disaster won the pushing contest. His physical strength surpassed
even Shion's, the one who has ridiculous strength and [Herculean Strength].
It
seems his physical abilities is strengthened to an overwhelming level...., I
heave a sigh at that.
Shion was
sent flying, The Demon Lord Orc Disaster try to finished Shion off.
Perceiving
the danger, Shion covered her body with her aura.
But
it seems she receive considerable damage from that attack.
Her
face filled with frustration, it seem it will take some time until she is able
to move again.
Without
noise, standing behind the Demon Lord Orc Disaster is a person, a samurai in
his prime.
Hakurou.
Even
I, observing from the sky can recognize the speed of the slash, it will hit.
It
can’t be stopped, it’s also impossible to avoid it. The sword slashes through
the body of Demon Lord Orc Disaster, cutting him into 2 separate pieces, the
head fall.
With
this he should be dead. So I thought.
Yet....
The
separated body parts connected by a yellow aura that coiling into them like a
tentacles
Then
it bend down, picking up the head that fell down, and fixed the head back to
the original location.
It
looks like a sight from a horror movie, everyone lost their words.
Hakurou
also opened his eyes in surprise.
I’m
convinced now.
The
Demon Lord Orc Disaster most formidable ability is his tremendous regeneration
ability.
Up
until now, it doesn’t have variety of resistance. However the problem is his
recovery power. Also, added with his resistance, it would be impossible to kill
him.
However, if we burn him together with Flame and [Black Lighting], it’s possible to surpass his defense and restoration ability.
However, if we burn him together with Flame and [Black Lighting], it’s possible to surpass his defense and restoration ability.
But
now it’s impossible......
Benimaru
and Ranga have run out of Magic power. Shion is injured, right now Hakurou is
exchanging blade against him one on one.
Hakurou’s
attack did not hit its target, the Demon Lord Orc Disaster’s attack also
doesn’t hit.
As
expected from a master. However, how long will it continue, the situation is
gradually getting worse.
At that time,
At that time,
[ Beheading Formation of Restraining String! ]
At
the same time as the voice heard, the Demon Lord Orc Disaster is captured by
the “Sticky Steel Thread”.
It
was Souei‘s doing. Quietly, lurking in Hakurou’s shadow, he is waiting for
the right timing.
I
see! I was impressed.
Like
this, even if you have high regeneration ability it would be useless.
Hero
always comes late. As expected of Souei.
The
moment I feel relived, I sense something out place.
His
yellow aura is coiling around the “Sticky Steel Thread”.
[Chaos
Eater]
The
Demon Lord Orc Disaster uses his skill. It is more heinous than when he
uses it at the Orc General.
It
corrodes every thing it touches.
That
yellow aura thingies must be the essence of the Demon Lord Orc Disaster skill.
In
fact, that skill is one of the ability of the Unique skill [Starving Ones].
Its
effect is corroding and decomposing every material he come in contact with.
When
the resistance failed to resist the corrosion, death will visit the living
creature.
The
Demon Lord Orc Disaster begin his pursuit.
[Die! Gaki
no kōshinenbu!!! (Death March Dance)
It
was the skill that Gelmudo used. But, the power level is
different.
Sensing
it, Hakurou and Souei retreat.
Benimaru’s
black flame prison (Hell Flare), nothing remains on its surrounding.
Although it power is not absolute, it didn’t give damage to the person touching
it, instead it will give them corrosion effect.
Quality, power, range. If all of it combined it will become a certain kill attack. Fortunately the speed is slow.
Quality, power, range. If all of it combined it will become a certain kill attack. Fortunately the speed is slow.
If
they receive it normally, the Oni will not stay unharmed.
[Fuhah~a!
Good! Entertain me more! It’s a good exercise before the meal.
You
guys must be very delicious. Fuhahaha! You all will become food for me. You
guys happy?]
My
subordinate, the main force of five people even if they work together,
they are still unable to win.
This
is...
I’m
no longer able to stop my body tremble.
This
trembling is, a trembling that comes from my instinct.
This bad. I can’t stop trembling
This bad. I can’t stop trembling
Was
it, fear?
No,
it’s different
This
was...
Joy.
Yes. I was feeling joyful!
I, from the bottom of my body, can no longer stop my instinct from going crazy and making noises from joy
My
subordinate, the main force of five people fighting together were not able to
win against this opponent.
Yet,
in my mind there was no fear.
The
feeling of depression that appear on the beginning, at this point it has all
been blown away
That’s
right, I recognize this guy as an enemy.
Sorry
for thinking of you as troublesome.
I
stop flying and descend to the ground.
When
I come closer, the yellow aura, Chaos Eater rushed towards me.
I
feel it coiling around me and stick to my body. This is unpleasant.
I
see, so he trying to eat me?
Nice, if you think you can do it, then do it!
Feeling highly excited from my instinct, smile began
to float on my face.
Before
you eat me, I will eat you first!
And thus the time comes for the clash between me and the Demon Lord Orc Disaster Gelmudo.
----------------------------------------------------------------
Yay! thank you for the chapter Guro-san and The defend -san
ReplyDeletelol Rimuru-sempai just became a pervert
DeleteEyy!! Meatbun!! I'm 7 months late xD
DeleteSorry, forgot to unlock the non edit. Done it just now
ReplyDeleteThis comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the chapter! :D
ReplyDeletewhat a cliffhanger
ReplyDeleteThanks! Thanks! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI'm so fucking happy! But I'm so sleepy! ... I'm going to read untill I don't take it anymore and I fall asleep!
Good night Guro!
Good night TheDefend! <- That's the editor, right? I'm so sleepy I can think anymore.
So! I wish you have amazing dreams with cookies and purple dotted parrots who can breath acid and ride mutant rats!
He divided*
ReplyDeleteand the fact that only *a few can fight
They were there* in case
The head observed* and realized*
While he kept* switching the troops to let them recover their fatigue, they are still* managing* to fight decently, even so, between the gap of switching the two teams*
While they did not drastically grow*
as many people as possible are* needed to surive!
With all of the dignity he had, he spoke in a loud voice*
Actually, fuck this, taking too long time.
Fixed, thanks for the comment
DeleteHooray.
ReplyDeletethank you for the chapter .
ReplyDeleteVery much appreciate all the work this took!!!
ReplyDeleteI think that you should keep the chapters in one tense. You tend to go back in forth between past tense and present tense.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the chapter.
That's because the Author writes in two tenses--sometimes in past, as a story teller, sometimes in present, as an actor.
DeleteThe POV change, the tenses change.
DeleteThanks for the translation guro!
ReplyDeleteGood job editor this was good. As the person above said try to keep the same tense.
I wish i could post some fixes but on phone till end of the week. Mostly tenses like the one who tryly desired* to become a Demon Lord was Gelmudo or at the start at somepoint it should be singular Lizardman etc
I'm using both since some of them are alreayd happen and some of them happen just a few instant ago and some just about to happen in the next second. It kinda weird if i just put everything in past tense
ReplyDeleteYes some fit present better but most should be past. For example the thay feeling of depresion blah blahvshould be past not present
ReplyDeleteWelp, compared to the non edit, my mistakes can still be considered cute xD
ReplyDeleteYup they cute good job againr
DeleteThanks for the new chapter!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the chapter.
ReplyDeleteThank ya very much for the translation, translator!! Many thanks towards the Author!!
ReplyDeletehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1v7DwdvAErr3bIk-oPvg9BethVTriJp2-6hJypiBKkG0/edit?usp=sharing
ReplyDeleteOne by one, they keep marching towards the thread that’s stretched like a spider nest,they eventually become a prisoner to the spider thread the more they moved forward.
ReplyDelete>One by one, they march forward as if to let themselves be trapped in the stretched spider thread.
The range is specified for individual, the strongest blow. (ED: Checked the raw, still didn’t make much sense) (TL: yes, some didn’t make sense)
>The area of attack was adjusted for individual target, the optimum blow.
His physical strength has surpassed Shion’s whose physical strength already enchanted by [Herculean Strength].
>His physical strength surpassed even Shion's, the one who has ridiculous strength and [Herculean Strength].
(I guess this one doesn't really matter.)
=END=
I kinda picked up the lines that you guys seem unsure with. Hope you don't mind~
No problem at all!
Delete^_^ thanks for the help.^_^
Thanks for the chapter.
ReplyDeleteNext it's the clash of Eating Skills!
ReplyDeleteShokugeki no Soma split story, lol
Thanks for your efforts
soo all the chapters after the capital arc are gone.
ReplyDelete